Thursday 17 December 2015

Editing Day 7

   Today I edited 10 pages. The word count is 74,411.

   I went over the dead vampire's resurrection and the albino werewolves who looked after her when she arrived at their doorstep. Her name is Eva. They look after London and know exactly what goes on. They each have different skills and roles. I gave them Christian names on purpose. They are also witches. It just seemed ironic and I liked the clashing imagery.
They are called Eve, Mary, Agatha, Justine, Lucy, Cecelia and Magdalene. Magdalene was on a soul searching journey, like a walkabout and was not with them for most of the story.

   Dead bodies were showing up on Brighton Beach and a curfew was set at 9PM.

   I really enjoyed editing a fight scene in Oxford where a man nicknamed God ( also known as Dr Godfrey ) had changed into a monster after being attacked by MOTH. He's the same creature that I mentioned in yesterday's blog. He stood up to his lab partner, Ace, who nearly killed him. Sandy also works in the experimental lab with them. He was attacked by MOTH and also changed into a monster. However, he tricked God into making him drink his blood until he was on the brink of death. When he recovered, he was back to his human self.

   The albino werewolves each have a streak of colour in their white fur to distinguish them from each other. I called them The Sisters of the Moon after Fleetwood Mac's song Sisters of the Moon. The song sounded like werewolves meeting under moonlight.

   This picture reminds me of the Seven Sisters of the Moon.
Will continue blogging again tomorrow.

   Good Night! xxx :)

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