It took me a while to get started but when I did it was fine. I edited part of the book when Eva started connecting with Daniel on a deeper level and Catherine's funeral was coming up. She was told that she wasn't welcome to the funeral by her mother, but Catherine's sister Beth insisted that she come. Eva also connected with Valentino for the first time in the book.
This is also part of the book where I started another plot of a monster similar to MOTH feeding on people in Brighton. Here are a couple of things I've written about it.
"The pavement
glistened underneath the lamp post’s light. Shadows lingered around the corner
of the pub. It slithered around the unconscious body, feeling around its head
for soft spots. It lowered its head and sunk its pincers into the body’s left temple.
The poison liquefied the body’s brain and it drank greedily under the ominous
clouds."
"The sea
frothed at the pebbles as wave after wave hit the sea front. Loud music blazed
from the clubs. A group of women on a hen night staggered outside clutching
onto their coats and jackets. One of them walked along the sea as the others
hailed a taxi.
In the shadows, something moved lazily. It
followed the woman, now vomiting on her shoes and touched her forehead. Green
goo dripped from its pincers as it lowered its head to her temple. Her body
convulsed as the poison made its way into her brain. It drank hungrily, growing
stronger and bigger with every feed. "
- Second instance of the monster.
Can you imagine the monster crawling up to these people, sinking its pincers into their brains and eating them?
Good Night! xxx :)
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